Wednesday, June 17, 2009

The Darkness Within Comments

Rating: 4.2

A murkey blackness radiating from the depths of my mind.
From the shadows to the air,
Together they entwine.
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Crystle Jones
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Everything we know. Everything we are. Every time we bleed. Every little scare....... we know but don't admit what we are... beautiful write and i congrate you on that.. beautiful presentatation....10 I openly admitted as 'I am disgrace' kindly read and offer critical comment. I love to hear from you.

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Shagun Khera 17 June 2009

beautiful ending...a nice poetry...darkness is always delicious to devour..

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Crystle Jones

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