Monday, February 18, 2008

The Darkness, Its Alone Comments

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The window, its open...
baby can't you see.
The rain, its falling...
tearing down on me.
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okeydokey #3 24 February 2008

hmm...I like it. It is very premature though, and I do believe you could add to this or make some random contextual alterations and make this even better than it is. But please keep doing what you are doing, I do like your style.

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