The Darkness Comments

A really relatable poem...'All possiblities slowly faded away from me Now it feels like the whole world is crashing down on me'...know that feeling well...beautifuuly written..well don..thanks for the invite. i shall continue to read more of your work. -SG

I love the way there a breaks in the poem and lack of quotation marks.. gives the poem a more ominous feel!

my gosh this is a poem that i can relate to like no other. the feeling of lost, hopelessness, hurt, feeling alone in a corner of the dark. i love this poem especially this part: : 'Now it feels like the whole world is crashing down on me I dont have no way to protect myself there is nowhere to hide i now know what i am, i am trapped in the darkness' amazing poem. youre very creative and you have voice through your writing which is a special gift that most people have to work hard for. Great job i really enjoyed it :)