The Darkness Comments

good thing darkness has gone and now welcome the light of a new day!

rayne Kitten, you speak loud and clear of 'the darkness'. I like it very much.I'm rating this poem a 10 for its content. Keep writing, set your computer on spell check.

very nice flow. great piece from top to bottom

a simple poem about darkness

the last line stands out.........good poem...... liked it - spelling mistakes....... ;)

Yeah darkness comes to go............only light is eternal.............. A Good Write............

nice poem with some unique spelling.

sweet poem...please keep writing poems like this one... and please read some of mine! ? ! ? ! ? ! Evil Bunbun

nice poem do not forget to chekc out mine

hey, kitty, kitty! great write from the hearts of those that fear the dark! come over and read my Kann Abels Restuarant. think you might like it. gave you a 10 for yor unique insight

good write full of guiding light

wow..thats deep! ! ! sometimes i feel like i have to hide from the darkness...good write...(^_^)

Yeah darkness comes to go away...........Good Write...........

good job i loved it keep up the good work

Hi Rayne Kitten, It's a very good poem.

Ohhhhhh! so creeeeepy! Loved it

interesting. very interesting.

These creatures of the dark in your sight, Now have their own fright. Good write Kitten, keep it coming :)