Friday, January 30, 2009

The Darkest Hour Of Day Comments

Rating: 5.0

Writing is for the tortured soul
Writing toward a tortured goal
As without a soul like the dark raven that flew
Out of sight into anew
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Vincent Dali
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Very dark and gothiclly revelation of the soul.This poem is very complex-lot's of paradox and really scary.I gave you another ten.You have the potential to be a great writer-I forsee a novel in your future that you've penned -perhaps? Good work! ! ! ! !

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Pandora Chaos 02 February 2009

theres no words to even begin to describe how amazing this pome is. all i can say is 'WOW'.

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Eyan Desir 01 February 2009

thts a good story...nice lines there good follow

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Brianna Trombley 01 February 2009

wow wonderful story being told in this poem, i really enjoyed the part about loves light being able to fade the darkness, great write

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Hope Wallin 01 February 2009

Wow. Really long, and some people get bored reading such a long poem. But yours keeps the readers attention, and keeps them reading. I love it. :)

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Fiona Davidson 30 January 2009

Excellent write Vincent...thank you...

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