Sunday, May 13, 2012

The Darker Side Of Man Comments

Rating: 5.0

Mankind is a mystery and I don't understand
Whether we are here by chance or guided by God's hand
There is so much good about us it could clearly fill a book
And yet to see the darker side you merely have to look
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Richard Lackman
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Elena Sandu 27 May 2012

Ahh, i am so sorry I can't rate it as I tried four times with 10! This poem touched me deep I think this is what needs badly to be fixed. We need to learn why and how. How to do to keep our darker side in a fair balance. I loved how you started the poem and gradually showed the difference and how the end came up with hope. Thank you, this is one of the most important questions world cannot all come to agree with a certain answer...

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Heather Wilson 13 May 2012

Ah, maybe some people`s darker side is out on show, and others hide it, being still there nevertheless, I like the thought and poem.

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Valerie Dohren 13 May 2012

A little more optimistic than my version Dick. Well penned.

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Joe Foster 13 May 2012

You're right. I think were to smart for our own good. It would be nice if everyone was kind hearted. Good message.

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