The Dark Wonders Comments
It's dark now, but you needn't have to worry
As the sky still has a million stars to carry.
In the nightly buzzes, remains the true beauty;
Behold! Our mother nature's divine dark entity!
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2 - stanza 3, with MY editing done: " The moon, the star of the starry frame, is Stealing the show from the stars, but, the moon, we cannot blame; For it is mother nature's perfected way In which we have no say. (i plan more commenting another day.) bri :)
1 - i like " divine dark entity" , but if you refer to the dark night sky, why do you shortly afterwards mention: " Making this night into a starry day! " ? line 7: I'll assume " stubborn" refers to a stubborn person, as you say " he" later. This line seems a bit too long for the poem.
Beautiful work of art, elegantly embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. An insightful creation. Thanks for sharing.
Really awesome poem. The night and nature has been described so beautifully.
Thank you very much. Your Ripples turning into Waves poem is fabulous.
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7/21/2025 12:53:17 AM # 1.0.0
Beautiful befitting tribute to the nature. Stars, moon and our own earth is a glory. Marvellous depiction of cosmos in style