Monday, February 2, 2009

The Dark Side Of The Heart Comments

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In the night I feel it there
The darkness in my heart
It's beating gives me quite a scare
It's tearing me apart
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Florence P. Wordsmith
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Jim Norausky 04 February 2009

This is a nicely structured poem that no doubt covers the feelings of tens of millions of people. Lucky are the happy ones. Jim

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Greenwolfe 1962 03 February 2009

The story of a despondent person here. One trapped by her own mind. A very fine poetic treatment and worthy of a serious read. GW62

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Killing Hope 02 February 2009

Really nice write, thanks.

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