Monday, December 19, 2016

The Dark Side Comments

Rating: 5.0

on the dark side of the planet
a hungry child is crying
a soldier falls in war
a young girl is enslaved
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Barry Middleton
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Nosheen Irfan 20 December 2016

An excellent write from your mighty pen. Kudos. In simple words you say a lot. Your voice is really powerful, the world must hear. A super 10.

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Barry Middleton 20 December 2016

I am glad you think so Nosheen. I do what I can to get my message out.

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Laurie Van Der Hart 19 December 2016

Very vivid and true poem, Barry. Nicely expressed. Such a beautiful planet and yet so full of darkness.

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Barry Middleton 19 December 2016

Thanks. I guess we must be thankful that it is not 100% dark.

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