Sunday, December 17, 2017

The Dark Season Comments

Rating: 5.0

Her fragile emotions blowing to and fro
Like a New York breeze,
Her tantalizing green eyes turning black,
All part of the big freeze,
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Richard Wlodarski 04 February 2018

Such optimism in the face of such adversity! And such wisdom! And such brilliance! And such a great work of art! A hopefully beautiful depiction of depression! Bravo, Hazel. The hero and heroine overcome! ! !

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Akhtar Jawad 31 December 2017

She thanks God for the beauty of his emotions, Saving her in the dark season, ..........................Depression at last ends, love is the best medicine for this sickness. A beautiful poem.

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Muzahidul Reza 26 December 2017

Her fragile emotions blowing to and fro Like a New York breeze, Her tantalizing green eyes turning black, All part of the big freeze, ............................ So I like her sentiment, emotion, romanticism, images, ..... I think your every poem is full of motion, emotion, sensiblities, portrayal, ......... images are also from that of deep from life, ............ thanks for sharing the poem with us, .. +++++++ 10

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Yiyan Han 19 December 2017

With support from family and society The dark season will go away And God is mercy - excellent piece

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Valsa George 19 December 2017

Without our knowledge, sometimes we can fall into depression, but if there are caring hands to hold us firm, we will never fall down. As sure as spring arrives after the chilling winter, this temporary depression will give way to greater cheer and heightened enthusiasm! The vagaries of moods are given poignant expression, but the tone is one of hope and not of despair! Great write, Hazel.....

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Susan Williams 18 December 2017

she tries to free herself from her ghosts of inadequacy, Ghosts that haunt her mind, - - - - - - -These lines are incredibly poignant and descriptive of the condition. Well done, Hazel.

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Sekharan Pookkat 17 December 2017

Fragile emotions shines in dreams And Shadows toggle to and fro To scream in the darkness of night Wriggling away from the conflict of mind- beautifully crafted - neatly executed the emotion of various stages of mind my 10++

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