The Dark Room Comments

It reaches a point Until you die You will see What you have done It doesn't stop Until it reaches You darkness inside..... last second step.... it will let go... dramatic. suspense. tony

an interesting write, Jovan. And, as my friend Souren says, a very well crafted finale. Thanks for sharing

You liked it thank you

'And the last second you step It will let go When you see it You will be afraid' A very well crafted finale of an artistically written poem. Thank you for sharing Jovan.