The Dark Horse Comments

Greg no I don't mind if someone corrects my grammer at all. I get a little testy when someone rewrites me by asking me to remove something though. My weakness is grammer and punctuation. Thank you Red

Joyce, I feel because you shift to the plural they in the 2nd stanza, that perhaps you should pluralise Horses in the 1st line. Also, line 4 should read Likened or you could maybe change to Akin to be grammatically correct. Hope I'm not being overly critical, but believe these changes would enhance the poem.