Tuesday, December 4, 2012

The Dark Holl Tolls Comments

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When the dark hour tolled its bell;
I had to bring certain things to light.

It was needed, the roots concealed yet;
Had to be brought to the surface.
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Sarang Mangi
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Paul Brookes 04 December 2012

Good poem loved the imagery however it should be light instead of lit otherwise great. : 0))

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