The Dark Groom And Bright Princess Comments

You are wonderful poet. Darkness is groom and brightness is bride. What an amazing imagination and powerful wisdom you have given!

Though the dark groom named the Night is deeply in love with the fair princess called Day, they are a pair of 'star crossed lovers' who cannot hold hands or be together. It is in a way very unfortunate. The poem indirectly suggests that there cannot be an alliance between darkness and light. Love this interesting metaphorical poem.

This poem reflects a powerful imagery. Darkness is groom and brightness is princess. I am feeling as this poem is a fable. This is very lovely.

A well composed contrast is thoroughly maintained through the poem. Outstanding work. Loved the last stanza.

The Night and Day..... a dark groom and a fair bride! But unfortunately this star crossed lovers cannot meet nor stand in a warm embrace! Great imagination! A 10

Verily, a good description of night and darkness