The Dark Force Comments

I wrote the poem 'Creating Choice Reality In Darkness Night' inspired by the poem 'The Dark Force' by the poet Abby Sze and dedicated to Abby Sze.

'I am the force in the darkness, I control the movement of the night. Close your eyes, Feel my existence running in veins. Open your eyes, Feel my existence expanding in fear.' it is said 'the thought is the father to the deed' actions follow thoughts, to think is to act; the choice might be close your eyes to darkness to fear, or open the eyes to love to light, we all chose

You've definitely have something going on here. Maybe you could rework a few lines, however the good work has already been penned. Keep it coming, champ.

from your note: * I wrote this poem to remind me and be careful not to become 'the dark and the black and the deep' that kind of a person. * a very good reminder for each of us. Thank you for sharing, Abby