The dark cloud.
It sits around your head
or inside it, more like.
Around your mind,
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Very well explained situation Michael, I thoroughly enjoyed reading this, it is great. Very well thought out and produced. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX
There is much in this poemmuch to read into... sadness, sadness, sadness and then light! Fine write... have a nice day.
All of the remedies you have described really do work, if only momentarily. Sometimes this is enough to gain a foothold on the climb out of the pit. Sometimes not.....but all worth a try. A well-put together poem here, Michael, with a message of hope. Full and powerful... Love, Fran xx