Wednesday, January 17, 2007

! The Dark Cloud Of Depression Comments

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The dark cloud.
It sits around your head
or inside it, more like.
Around your mind,
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Michael Shepherd
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Francesca Johnson 22 January 2007

All of the remedies you have described really do work, if only momentarily. Sometimes this is enough to gain a foothold on the climb out of the pit. Sometimes not.....but all worth a try. A well-put together poem here, Michael, with a message of hope. Full and powerful... Love, Fran xx

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Ernestine Northover 17 January 2007

Very well explained situation Michael, I thoroughly enjoyed reading this, it is great. Very well thought out and produced. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Cecil (cj) Krieger 17 January 2007

There is much in this poemmuch to read into... sadness, sadness, sadness and then light! Fine write... have a nice day.

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