Sunday, December 13, 2020

The Daring Move... Comments

Rating: 5.0

I remember the first day
When our honeymoon hour finally
Turned into fighting, greatly
Shattering me complete, as why
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Varsha M
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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 04 February 2021

Its only true love that is blissful. All else brings bitterness and remorse. A poem so beautifully crafted, dear Varsha.

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M Asim Nehal 04 February 2021

Very true. Misunderstandings, fights and little tussles are part and parcel of this life but with love everything vanishes and what remains in the end is LOVE. Nice that you overcame all obstacles to find and believe in true love.5***

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Bernard F. Asuncion 14 December 2020

A well penned poem... Truly splendid...5 stars *****

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