The Dandelion Poem by Jez Burl

The Dandelion

Rating: 5.0


star-like seeds disperse
adrift in the air so swift
left alone ~ the moon

2 June 2021
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POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Midst the bosom of an exuberant field nestles a lonesome dainty dandelion. I was here so many times before but I didn't see its existence like today. Despite the blossoming azalea flowers behind it, it never fails to exude an ethereal captivating beauty ~ reminding me how fleeting moments are ~ no matter how good, they wont last! I kneel down to feel the magic of its spell and touch its skinny stem instead lest I might pluck the fragile petals. I close my eyes in reverie, but before I could make a wish~
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 21 January 2024

A fascinating little poem. Top score and to my favourites

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Jez Burl 07 August 2024

Thank you Dr Dilip. It took some years for me to get back here. Thank you for your inspiring feedback.

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