Monday, February 20, 2023

The Dancing Firelight Comments

Rating: 5.0

The flickering, dreamy firelight, does a sultry dance,
Upon the walls of cozy evening, at autumn's arrival.
The fading sun left its memory, the crackling flames;
And bluebird sings sunshine in lush, scented tropics.
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When the dancing flames leave shadows human mood tends to humming rather than singing

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 21 February 2023

Vivid imageries Evelyn. Nice work. Congrats

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 22 February 2023

Your appreciation is very nice and encouraging.

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Anjandev Roy 21 February 2023

Justly glorious........

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 22 February 2023

Thank you. I'm glad you found it to be so.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 21 February 2023

This is poem was beautifully written and a joy to read Bravo!

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 22 February 2023

Your lovely remarks are very nice to read.

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Rob Lamberton 20 February 2023

I've been burning brush in the snow. Watching the fire dance in the snowy starlit night has been an enjoyable crackling song!

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 22 February 2023

There is nothing quite like an open fire, The song is as lovely as the dance.

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Sandra Feldman 20 February 2023

Just lovely! Warm and colorful, imagery heartfelt and delightful. Enjoyed, thank you.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 22 February 2023

Thank you very much for your words of appreciation.

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