Thursday, May 24, 2018

The Dancer Comments

Rating: 5.0

She was a dancer
the music and movement fed her soul
she danced through life
and every strife
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Aqua Flower
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Laya Bajpai 20 August 2018

I have tears in my eyes as I read this poem...

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Carl Roussell 24 May 2018

Getting your mind to an earlier happier time can be such a challenge. A 10.

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Aqua Flower 24 May 2018

Thank you for the nice rating! I was a dancer so this was easy to compose! Dancing is another form of artistic expression that I used to like more than poetry. But since my body doesn't move as well, I though poetry may be a little easier!

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Robert Murray Smith 24 May 2018

A poignant write but there is hope.++10

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Aqua Flower 24 May 2018

I always liked the word poignant! it sounds so sophisticated. Thank you, Robert, as always, for reading my poetry and ffor your nice comments!

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