Saturday, February 6, 2010

The Dance Of Clowns Comments

Rating: 5.0

The clowns dance upon invisibility
their painted masks hide tears,
Do clowns not love
though misshapen?
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Resten Swondo
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Jean Dament 06 February 2010

Great job! You captured the essence of a clown's life. There are ordinary people who clown around to hide their sorrow too. I gave it a ten even though it didn't show up. Spiritsong

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