Wednesday, March 28, 2012

The Dance Comments

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The rain-dance required prior permission from Mother.
IN the tiled courtyard in the middle of the house,
Gleefully shedding our clothes—those encumbrances—
We two brothers would assemble.
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Makarand Paranjape
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Dr Antony Theodore 06 October 2019

Soaped from head to toe, dancing wildly, Slowly washed by the rain to pink nakedness Would follow me across the gulf of puberty Into the wet dreams of an uneasy adolescence... very nice poem and imagination. tony

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Ahmedabad, Gujarat / India
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