Saturday, May 12, 2007

The Dance Comments

Rating: 4.7

Andre fell in love with her beauty,
her royal elegant appearance.
She carried herself proud, purring
like a kitten, never boisterous or loud.
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Melvina Germain
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Yes this truly is a fairy tale...it has all the makings of one! If only it could always stay that way...((Smile)) Your descriptions and ideas were so well written in this mystical piece. I love how the imagery carried me along from beginning to enddddddddddd! A Great well written write........... =Shelley=

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Lorena Walker 15 May 2007

very descriptive and beautiful!

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Scarlett Treat 12 May 2007

And, I just know, they lived happily everafter? Wonderful fairy tale beginning....more, more!

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Esther Leclerc 12 May 2007

Melvina, wonderful description and enticing hints of more to come... Esther : ]

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David Harris 12 May 2007

Melvina, the lovely creation of a royal ball just sweeps us off our feet with the underling romance with in it. Impeccably written as always. A real joy to read as soon as you come online. Top Marks from me. Thanks for sharing. David

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 12 May 2007

Your the bell of the ball, and your story kept me Enthralled... Melvina 10

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Melvina Germain

Melvina Germain

Sydney, Nova Scotia
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