Friday, August 7, 2009

The Dance Comments

Rating: 5.0

As we danced, suppended in time
I felt almost as if we were floating
Having your body so close to mine
Had my head dangerously close to exploding
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Tyrone Wingfield
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Patrick A. Martin 17 August 2009

Ahhh! the dance. Be it the dance of love or the dance of life when two are entangled it is entrancing.10

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Life Poem 12 August 2009

wow! i love dance but i love this feeling you gave!

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Lovely Mama 10 August 2009

thats how i used to feel. with such graditude you wrote a master piece no one can take from you. spectacular writing! ! !

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Evaughn Gray 07 August 2009

This is such a sweet poem between two lovers. It speaks of a beauiful true love. This poem has such a wonderful love, a love that has taken time for these lovers to be together, a love that will last forever... You and I Together Forever....True love. You are that meaning to me. ~ Hazel G.E

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Ted M 07 August 2009

The Great Dance......speaks of great friendship.

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