The Dance Comments

Loved the concept of crystalline events

i like the change of emotions in this

This is a delightful piece, Hunter, which expresses the intensity of passion and the fear of rejection with a wonderful use of metaphor. My only criticism is the repetition of the word 'memory' in the first stanza - it jars somewhat. Might I suggest that you change 'memory' to 'image' in line three. Otherwise the first stanza is superb. Your Polaroid image in particularly is highly original. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

My memory is a Polaroid picture left in the sun. Very Nice Indeed - 10+

this is beautiful. the first line really gripped me and you write fanastically <3 10

Very nice. The polaroid metaphor was exquisite

A well-written piece and really gripping. I like it so much. I rate it as a 10+++

this on eis a marvel and so captivating.... you got the stuff in you... dont let the flame go out.... read my poem called ' they say you are dancing '