Monday, November 28, 2011

The Dance Comments

Rating: 2.5

Many years have been spent learning the steps
of how to go to and fro…
sashaying and twirling to a melody so sweet.
Perfecting the dance and mastering grace
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Sonya Johnson
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Jason Persilver 28 November 2011

Really nice poem. I think it's great, but the last half seems to not flow as well as the first half. Thanks for sharing!

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