Friday, March 31, 2006

The Dance Comments

Rating: 5.0

Play me a sweet song
So I can dance
This is where I belong
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Elizabeth Castleberry
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Nimal Dunuhinga 07 April 2006

A sing-songy blossom open her petals and no any restrictions to kind butterflies The dance with the song of life and the lovers in strife.

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Ray Lucero 31 March 2006

Elizabeth, May I have this dance? (I know, 'no cutting in') Descriptive, fluid and romantic. Nice effort. Ray

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