Wednesday, April 13, 2011

The Damnation Of My Soul Comments

Rating: 5.0

27 years
and I had had it up to here wth the Bronx!
Had it up to here
with the smell, the stench, the filth and the noise!
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buried alive
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Tom Allport 27 May 2017

a sorrowful poem of one's actions not meant which sometimes can make us truly lament? .................superbly written BA.

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K J 05 June 2011

It is indeed worthy of praise, but it would have made a better short story than a poem. It sounds almost like a ballad.

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