The Damage Is Done (In Senryu Form) Comments

Some of the finest poetry comes from the darkest place. Pain penned perfectly. love, Allie xxxx

Fran, you said my Sleeping Champion was sad, this just as sad if not sadder. If ever need someone to talk to you know I'm here for you my friend. Take care now. Hugs David

It's very sad Fran, and your hurt shows so much in this poignant piece, hope you heal soon love Lynda xxx

The sound of a breaking heart echoes throughout this powerful poem Fran, the controlled form adds to the emotional impact of this piece, each stanza tightly packed with the hurt and pain of a love that is no more. Written by one with a true heart and soul. Justine xx

I know you are hurting sweetheart and boy, does it come out, together with your strength (which knows no bounds) in this heartbreaking and powerful piece. However. You may feel damaged but you are not. You're one of the most beautiful people I have ever had the pleasure of meeting and I love ya. t x

And hopefully your days Will end on something Worthwhile and good. Though I doubt You will turn about. sincerity thy name is womanhood...you end up loving what you hate

Francesca, heartfelt indeed. 'You have damaged me- ' very moving. Margeryxx