The Dairy Of A Wind Chime Comments

Every time I read something you have written, it becomes better and better..(smile) Time spent reading you is time well spent.

I love what you've done with this poem. Connecting the wind chime with the season, showing a relation between the two. And painting a beautiful picture of the fall in all her glory. Once I had some w. chimes and enjoyed them till the wind blew them down. Your poem makes me hear them again. PS: At least God can empathize with the asthmatic. Love it. Thanks. 10

I am rattled rougher In the breeze of Autumn- But my silver song, Is all the more louder, And all the more piercing, In storms. ------- metaphorical composition of the seasons.........I loved it!