Wednesday, August 15, 2007

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The cord of life is broken
by a mistermeanered fact.
Dark clouds of heaven,
curtain the sunshine back,
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David Harris
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JoAnn McGrath 15 August 2007

I like your 79's: O) ......ditto to Marci....and nice rhthym on this one

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Marci Made 15 August 2007

Dear David, your usage of metaphors in here is astounding and so right on...An excellent write [why doesn't that surprise me? ] marci.xo

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