Sunday, March 1, 2009

The Daily News Comments

Rating: 5.0

Spinning effervescent tales
Conjuring erudite lies
With magic smoke screen
Our minds mesmerize
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Roshni D'Souza
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Martin O'Neill 04 March 2009

Roshni, you are so right, we dazzle even ourselves with our own minds sometimes. Well penned.

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Kesav Easwaran 02 March 2009

may be we like them that way...we know many are lies...well, you cannot add on to truths...but lies, , , you can build on and on...may be this is why we like them that way...good write, Roshni...10

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~ Jon London ~ 01 March 2009

Outstanding word play, your lyrics are something else, very well written

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