The Cutting Edge Comments

Good Poem Marvin, I like the positive conclusion

Just hang on.. are the right words.. a wonderful piece of hope...you're right, Marvin.. this is an excellent piece of yours.. hugs, Meggie

A lovely poem that i do enjoy...how beautifully the despairs slowly ascend to the ladder of success - the in desire through cascading of gimmick. a beautuiful articulation of parody in a unique way, i do appeciate, thanks for sharing

What a coincidence! I was really looking for a poem about hope. And you just handed it to me in a cyber platter. And a good one at that! Perfect 10.

I like the way your poem turns despair into hope and optimism. Well done.

A piece as per your title..... t x