Thursday, December 3, 2015

The Cut Comments

Rating: 5.0

Blade rips the flesh
Pleasure or pain, let it be your guess
Blue to red it turns
As the wound continuously burns
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Billy Loving
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Ratnakar Mandlik 03 December 2015

Wonderful couplets devoted to a sensitive subject- wound caused by a cut. Liked the minute details incorporated in the narration. Enjoyed the poem. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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