Friday, February 21, 2014

The Curse Of Waiting Comments

Rating: 3.5

Time do not stand still
Nor it waits for just anyone.
It moves on its own free will.
It is up to us what will be done.
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Jazib Kamalvi 19 April 2017

Wait is an examination of patience. It provides us slowness and steadiness and we ultimately win the race. Thanks

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Diane Montemayor 05 October 2016

Dear Diana, Still stranded on the past, , , , so emotional... Salamat kababayan. Sincerely, diane

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Nika Mcguin 24 February 2014

As the clock comes ticking fast She is still stranded on the past Trapped for years on this island's lore She is cursed to wait a hundred more Haunting lines indeed; I sometimes feel like this could be my destiny.

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Anil Kumar Panda 21 February 2014

nice poem.sweet rhyming and flow.liked it.

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