Wednesday, December 7, 2016

The Curse Of The Eve's Apple Comments

Rating: 5.0

Die! ! Die! ! You constant life-giver.
I'm only 12! 12 I Say! Why didn't God just punish her sin.
Instead he made me die inside, feeling so sick within.
Hey! You! Yea You Almighty! I feel you batter me as i lie limp! I feel like I've been raped by a sword. Mannnn! Why me? Why us?
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MyIner Agony
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Chinedu Dike 15 December 2016

A very catchy title. It's an insightful piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely penned from the heart with conviction. A good poem questioning the consequences of the 'Original Sin'. Thanks for sharing Mylner. Please read my poem CHILDREN OF CRUEL FATE.

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