The butterfly swirls
and serenades the roses.
But the dainty blooms,
are caught by the gusty wind,
...
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The butterfly shall wait. Nice visual. Nice tanka, Rose Marie
Such lovely images and thoughts of life! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! ..++++++++++++++++++++++
Ohh, How beautifully heart moving and so beautifully thoughtful! ..
Beautiful tanka...an imagination true to reality....liked very much
Hard to fight with fate, no one has ever conqured it. Fabulous 5*****
the beauty of the line 'The butterfly swirls and serenades the roses', extends into a tanka of exceptional depth, strangely I have used butterfly flight at the start of an extensive lay to also lead into complex imagery