The Curls Of Destiny (Te Amo) Comments

Soul, this is a magnificent work. I had to read and reread it a few times. There's something about the melody, the rhyme....it is as though there is an echo. And that, I think, is fitting....as the title suggests, destiny or fate can curl back on itself. And that may just be the finest vision of karma.

To walk on the karma roads... it is the main theme of the poem. All people as per their karma(deeds) enjoy the happiness or sorrowfulness in life. It is a great tribute to your friend. Thanks for sharing.

Blossom around the stem! ! With the muse of love and life. Nice work.

A significant, artful and empathetic piece. Extremely fine work, Soul!

A beautiful work. Thought provoking. You have drawn the reality nicely.Your art work is splendid Soul!

beautifully & sad, well done

Love the words 'curls of destiny' - beautiful and inspired.

Soul! you always had the feeling to others and this is a beautiful piece.

I've done the link on Facebook. And I hope that the waves of fate acts in favor to all of us. Gorgeous and dramatic poem.

Thank you for sharing these wonderful words.. It is hard to believe domestic violence is still so strong. I have saved these words

How beautiful you are, Soul! Hope one day I could get my hands on this book, for sure I will love it as much as I loved this poem. Congratulations to our friend and to you also sweet Soul!

An eternal tribute paid to your friend! In these days of miserliness of expression and thoughts I appreciate you for your eloquent wavelength of passion and feeling. What is written makes you much much much written dear Soul.

who can seal all dreams to be true Cut away from you, love to be read again a pain filled my heart..... love kee

so traumatically written dear soul.i enjoyed the forth part.really impressing. all say human can build his/her fortune and destiny but i wonder what about flowers and trees or the roses.can they build their destiny? of course they cant.or as you have mentioned the curl of destiny. reminds me this statement MARCUS AURELIUS has once said: ADAPT YOURSELF TO THE LIFE YOU HAVE BEEN GIVEN, AND LOVE THE PEOPLE WHOM DESTINY SURROUNDED THEM. it may be true about your friend she must adapt or deal with that passion.your love may help her. any way so touching (the love between a rose and a tree) ~nb