The Cure You Shared Comments
You turn and risk two smiling eyes my way as I walk in..
how pretty you look sitting upright in that little bed,
Quietly you whisper, how well your wedding gown would fit,
imagining our dream wedding dance in your fever'd head.
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2 starry-eyed " failing to recognize the practical realities of a situation" " Unafraid of death's grasp, I pulled away her tear-filled mask, dared kiss two lips in precious life that hugged me one more time" YOU ARE PULLING AT OUR " HEARTSTRINGS" ! last words " HAS meant'? bri :) to MyPoemList
1 st.2 " my heart's saviour layed" I'd use comma after 'saviour/savior' also. And " laid'? I can't keep track of the spellings and times to use all the tenses of the related verbs " lie" and " lay" ! ! st.3 CNA " Certified Nursing Assistant" cont.
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7/19/2025 3:25:06 AM # 1.0.0
What a passionate, emotionally charged poem. Loved it. Full score.