Tuesday, March 28, 2006

The Cup Of Love Comments

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Surrender to me,
Give yourself up,
Let it overflow,
That beautiful cup.
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Aisha Sherazi
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Will Barber 03 June 2006

This is a love poem - to everyone. In the 23rd Psalm, the psalmist says 'my cup overfloweth. Surely goodness and mercy will follow me..' Your overflowing cup is just such a comfort. This is a joy to read - lyrical and so beautiful to read. The Greek gods had a cup-bearer who brought them draughts of ambrosia. This is such a draught. Love, Will

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Leigh A. Hill 10 April 2006

beautiful! way to go! keep writing ~starr

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