The Cup Of Coffee Comments

as the sparkling dew fluffs over the shadow of the grin green mellows when slaked by the brims of sweet breath........wonderfully wrought by the imagery yet of unique genre, as the gentle rippling of autumn`s dream, well penned,10+, thanks for sharing

I love the way that you transform an ordinary thing, an everyday event, through such intricate and vivid language. Don

Excellent monologueing, young lady...tight, crisp & mellifluous structure....intricaly detailed depiction makes this a slam-dunk of a poetic gem, T.O.! ~ FjR ~ ..2008..