Friday, July 2, 2010

The Cuckoo Bird Comments

Rating: 4.7

The autumn is over.
Naked trees with feeble branches,
are now dressed by blooming flowers
And the leaf, that hatches.
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Rabia Fazal
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Katherine Shaw 06 August 2010

I love the way you said a leaf hatches, ...But you said autum is over and spring nears? if autum is over then it IS spring lol x i have more poems posted, please read when you have time, please leave coments and a vote, thanks x

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Afzal Shauq 15 July 2010

awesome... impressive alot..just keep writing

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Rabia Fazal 15 July 2010

Thank you for liking it

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Saadat Tahir 02 July 2010

very nice and lovely lines cheers

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