## The Cryptograph To Halt Thy Kiss.... Comments

absorbed thoughts intake manifold, all in .and self invested but spurred on by divine intentions...

this is great! i really like it! very descriptive.

Great poem as usual, Sarwar. A strange kiss, though.

That was a wild ride. I know who you are. You are a very good poet.

The tightness of the broken thought is obvious here, strong words, with a tinge of wit and love, some Jesus, in your unique style.10++

SARWAR, WOW, FLOATING, SOARING, SWIRLING, EXAMINING, FEELING, QUESTIONING AND DRAWING IN NATURE AND ALL ITS WONDERS ALONG WITH THE COMPLEXITY OF HUMAN EMOTIONS AND ATTRACTIONS! QUITE A POWERFUL GROUPING AND I LOVE IT. I APPRECIATE ANYONE WHO IS TUNED INTO THE MYSTERIES OF NATURE AND RECOGNIZES THE CONNECTION TO US THAT SO FEW ARE AWARE OF. CREATURES ARE MAGNIFICENTLY COMPLEX. WE KNOW SO LITTLE ABOUT THEM, BUT WHAT DO THEY KNOW OF US? SILENTLY THEY OBSERVE AND KNOW? I WISH YOU WELL! CAROL

beautifull...has alot of meaningfull sentences :) ...thank you for sharing :)

the question you raised in the last of your piece of poetry is really touching heart..because there are many challenges to face in life and the humankind in different fair or unfair means try to cope with..but still the questions are that if we are on the right path to get our destinations or just going to words no where...a good piece 10/10

this is a stunning write! Beautiful..

woow.... beautiful..

sound like the classicals! the ending is great... please keep on touch.

The poem has an uniqueness.Words chosen wonderfully.While reading the poem I had a feeling as if I was revolving in a merry-go-round kind of thing which moves on its horizontal axis.That is nothing but eternity.We want to synchronize our speed with the speed of eternity finally submit to it.Loved your poem Sarwar on my first entry to your site.

You got the flair with words. congrats

Another creative, fast paced poem.............Nice and musical.........

very catchy and creative good for you

Spell binding lips....

Let the crows shout raucous.. Forget all cuckoo’s koo koo…. Focus on melodious ah…. nocturnal song of the nightingale… love this part..awesome!

beautiful.... really a pleasure to read... loved the first stanza and of course d last line... thanks..10

...'I know thyself an awesome art, the attention-grabbing heart'... liked the quoted lines most...poem boisterously expressive...10

I paid attention to the last line that keeps all the meaning.