The Cryptic Script Comments

I love this innovative poem! The echoes of Nature are creatively captured and produce a tangible effect to the senses. Beautifully done!

(cont.) ha ha. i see both PH and i messed up/made mistakes, it seems, in that when i check my Postings i'm shown that i double-submitted some of my comments here, before THIS ONE! ! ok, OLD i can relate to! PH keeps me from being ALONE. PH includes VALSA GEORGE! Thanks, V.G. bri :)

(CONT.) BILLOWS? NOT Willows? ok, OLD i can relate to! PH keeps me from being ALONE. PH includes VALSA GEORGE! Thanks, V.G. bri :) p.s.! i commented two years ago! what a waste of my incredibly VALUABLE TIME today! ! (CONT.) BILLOWS? NOT Willows? ok, OLD i can relate to! PH keeps me from being ALONE. PH includes VALSA GEORGE! Thanks, V.G. bri :) ! i commented two years ago! what a waste of my incredibly VALUABLE TIME today! !

naught archaic pronoun: naught 1. nothing. he's naught but a worthless fool synonyms: nothing, nothing at all, no point, no purpose, no effect; More nil, zero; informal zilch, zip, nada, diddly-squat all his efforts will have been for naught noun North American 1. the digit 0; zero. I GUESS THERE IS naught LEFT TO SAY ON THAT SUBJECT! (CONT.) '

Reciting the saga of pain provokes thought. This poem talks about blowing of wind on dry leaves and we feel that again greenness will reappear. This poem is very brilliant and amazing poem definitely...10

Great mystery and suspense, Valsa. You had me hanging on to my seat. Loved every moment of it!

A well penned poem, liked it.............................

“The billows howl-“ …… ………..”billows”? could my friend Valsa mean large waves on a lake or ocean? OR is it “willows”? OR ……….i HAVE heard of “pillow talk”! ! : ”pillows”? ? - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - “billows Plural form of billow, (bĭlˈō) ► • n. A large wave or swell of water. • n. A great swell, surge, or undulating mass, as of smoke or sound. • v. To surge or roll in billows.” - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - This poem could depress some readers; not Bri of course. I like it. I like how she draws out some of the worrrrdzzz. bri :) p, s. noooowwww i see that i commented on this last year! well, no harm done; i enjoyed it again! bri :)

Reciting the saga of the pains of life. Nice work.

i played the video, only heard the music - ticking, rustling. and the Jazzzzzzz.. Time and tide waits for no man. these lines are great. the saga of pain that never dies The sea of life flows on and on......

dear Valsa, i see you left a comment on ME (my favorite subject) a few months ago. thanks. this poem yes, a bit 'cryptic'. and how strange that just last night i Googled cryptology machine in order to respond to another poet's message! he had written something i thought was cryptic and i wanted to tease him. you almost put me to sleep with all those zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzS. does life have a script we are to follow? i think i forgot to study my lines. this is a bit pessimistic about life. it makes me need some ice cream to lift my spirits. thanks for the excuse! bri :) billows=clouds? i may have only 'seen billows used in my lifetime to describe lots of smoke coming from a large fire. pillows i'm more familiar with.

The wind rustling - naught, the billows howling - time, the old bemoaning - alone- -The sea of life / flows / on and on! Simply Admirable! !

None waits for none- - - - really neither time nor tide. Loved.