The Crying Orphan..My First Poem... Comments

All that I have to say is wow. That was really awesome and inspirational. So much feeling in this piece. Great work and keep it up.

Wow that was really good i can imagin myself in it...... keep up the great works

Its a great masterpiece.your first poem, i can; t believe.its really marvellous

the kindness that we share, is far beyond compare. we can only be judged by the one up above, and in your poetry you have all his love. continue to write, for it is instilled in your heart, and the best ones are yet to come as i can plainly see, that all of your writings was truely meant to be. A DOUBLE TEN

your first poem... great starting! ! ! it's a touching and piercing poem.

see, i told you your poetry was great.if that indeed was the 1st poem ever written by you, to be honest you cannot tell it, bcuz of how emotional, exceptiuonal, beautiful it is....cant wait to read another 1.gave you n the poem another 10

we al are beggars if see at the sky and cry for every plesure. same situation with have nots........ beautiful write madame....10

Story in a poetic form. Lovely and touchy. Poem in favor of mankind,10+++

written from a good heart the goodness in you, in this poem you share.. very poetic....touching... expression of loving the unlovable... Seeing in his eyes the eyes of God begging for love... is such great act of generosity.. thanks for sharing this noble poem 10++++ l♥ vel♥ ts, _maia_

Though the lines were a little bit rough however, each of them has deep meaning, a reflection of sincerity and kindness. Well done...thanks

a poetic story, kindness based intentions, fantasy which has reality touching effects... all this sweet poem shows that you are much kind herted and feel whats going around you and you try to be a part of... well done dear friend for this sweet and lovely poem...i liked it very much and appreciate you for reality related poetry and touchy issues to raise in poems... well done 10 +++++

this is very beautiful.a poem with a touch of love to real orphans....grace

tamara dear...hi we poets are strange creatures we cherish our first poetic effort as a first born...rememebering it with tender care...and a softness especillt resrved..but honest you did a marvelous job its so touchy and full of emotion...it gushes to your head in amoment of heady philanthropy...but it is a special caring feelin heart that can see think and talk like that beautiful poem beautiful person i may offer only ten cheers

another great one from you and haan the pictures are getting less blurred now ++++10 anjali

A POEM WHICH WAS WRITTEN FOR A TRUE STORY IT IS FOR A CHILD, A WOMAN OR A MAN... FOR A NEEDY ONE.. THAT ORPHAN..AN OLD ONE or A NEW BORN MAY BE..

As you walked your trail of tears little pieces that you dropped and were picked up finaly when to tired to go on and you finaly rested we came in the early dawn and remixed your make up..iip