Friday, March 4, 2016

The Cry Of The Suicidal Girl Comments

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As this tear drop falls
No one hears my call
My strange odd call
As this tear drop falls
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Victoria Hudson
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Mike Smith 05 May 2016

The final line of the poem is so important. People who have these feelings should not be trivialized or told to 'cheer up'. This is a serious condition. It effects people all over the world every day. I think the best thing to tell a person in this situation perhaps is simply that they are not alone. And to mean it. Depression is a demon all itself, but to have to try to combat it without anyone in your corner to help you, that is when tragedies happen. Meaningful write

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James Mclain 04 March 2016

It's been my experience that folk's whom do they tell no one, until the deed is done. Twenty two thousand do each year, with the deadly gun.. iip

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Dr Antony Theodore 04 March 2016

As the tear drop falls No one hears my call My strange odd call As this tear drop falls.. depressions can destroy us . try to get out of it . there are lot of people who love us and care for us. look at the nature and call the name of God. God bless you. tony

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