The Cry Of My Heart Comments
I was born when I was born
But I won't die when I'm dead
I will live after my death
That's the cry of my heart
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I love the consistent two line Petra meter and the consistent flow of thought. You are doing good bro. Pls do consider reading a few of my poems as well, notably 'Let's Grow Up Together'
An insightful rendition nicely put together with conviction. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched....
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7/27/2025 5:01:16 AM # 1.0.0
Nice poem with a touch of eternity. Please, keep it up!