Curse not this lovely land of mine,
Pull not the trigger and I'll be fine,
Drink and eat with me in the table of brotherhood,
Love is served as the most nutritious food.
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Absolutely wonderful! You continue to amaze me. Please continue writing. ~R-D-F~ Rawr. <3
Now this is a real good write Juneil. It has style and is put together with much sense of rhythm and metre. This one I love. It has great appeal. Keep up the writing.
wow, this is a great poem. i think every magazine would love to publish it. keep on juneil.
Your words are impassioned. The reader senses the personal history (perhaps) that inspired them. The title is excellent and your final stanza is particularly good. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥