Saturday, August 30, 2008

The Cry Of Innocent Comments

Rating: 5.0

Curse not this lovely land of mine,
Pull not the trigger and I'll be fine,
Drink and eat with me in the table of brotherhood,
Love is served as the most nutritious food.
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Juneil Sechico
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Alison Cassidy 27 December 2009

Your words are impassioned. The reader senses the personal history (perhaps) that inspired them. The title is excellent and your final stanza is particularly good. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Absolutely wonderful! You continue to amaze me. Please continue writing. ~R-D-F~ Rawr. <3

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Great Poem! Great read!

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Midnight Writer 08 September 2008

Really good bro, you've got talent.

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Fay Slimm 04 September 2008

Now this is a real good write Juneil. It has style and is put together with much sense of rhythm and metre. This one I love. It has great appeal. Keep up the writing.

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John Tiong Chunghoo 30 August 2008

wow, this is a great poem. i think every magazine would love to publish it. keep on juneil.

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Juneil Sechico

Juneil Sechico

Bayabas, Cagayan de Oro City
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