The Cry Of An Orphan Comments

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Indeed good one keep it up

A well written poem with nice imagery but I 'm unable to vote! a problem somewhere!

Again, you write with such clarity and meaning. Keep up the great work. Wayne Bowen...a comment on my poems would be appreciated.

If it is possible to beg death to cease for some time, it would have been ok but it can't and it would continue to sting man! maybe it can consider the orphan. Musa, your poem is impressive and i love your diction. read my poem 'the coolness within' and send comment to me.

Abdullah, you are doing well here, so let the vigour of inspiration burn more inside you to get your pen improving.

Well...that's AWESOME Abdullah...your english is very good...and for sure this piece makes sense...it is so sad but so nice at the same time...very well written :) ..gonna read others =)

nice sad poem: ( keep writing and thank u for ur valuble comments :)

He tried, but ahead is the ocean of agony nice sad reflective poem, very well written 10

Well done..nicely said. Thanks for sharing your thoughts