Monday, January 21, 2013

The Cry Of A Son Comments

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My Father oh my Father
I don't want to work any harder
My whole life is nothing but bothers
Yet I'll accept no other title rather
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Clarence Prince
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Bri Edwards 17 October 2016

i wonder who is speaking. Jesus (the man-god OR the Son of God) , or some non-god human in need of help? ? ? like the bit of rhyming you've used. i'll use this in Section B of October's 'a showcase for PH poets'. thanks for letting me use it; i didn't have to ask, did i? ? bri :)

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Stephani Kievaughan 16 February 2016

in like with your prayers and thought's on god. i also have written a prayer. titled The Dish Washer's Prayer i hope you may give it a read.

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Afrooz Jafarinoor 06 September 2015

Dear Clarence, Your poem is a true prayer to the Lord! I' m happy to know you and dedicate my new poem September, to you who were born in september!

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